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January 6, 2012
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CommissionLyricaBelachium by crimson-nemesis CommissionLyricaBelachium by crimson-nemesis
Finished commission for :iconlyricabelachium: featuring her OC twins AshBringer and CliffStrider fighting each other :3

This turned out much better than I thought and I'm very pleased with the result though there are still a couple of things that bug me but if I tried to fix them all I would never get done ^^

Lines done in Corel Painter X
Colors done in SAI
Some final lighting and adjustments done in PS CS5

.... yeah I just can't get all I want with one programm :3
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I really like this scene. The poses look so natural. The coloring is magnificent, and the way you positioned them is perfect. The way Cliffstrider is looking into Ashbringer's eyes with an evil smirk just sends chills up my spine. This picture sends so many thoughts in a person's head like "I bet you they are fighting over who is the most powerful..." or "If I were Cliffstrider, I would totally shoot Ashbringer with my gun..." or something like that. That is what true art does. ;)

The only thing I would recommend is maybe next time, you can brighten their eyes up a bit to make them glow. It seems like they are in a dark area, which would make the light effect glow even more.
But, people are just too distracted on how amazing this picture is, they ignore it. If I wasn't writing this Critique, then I would not have noticed it.

Amazing job. Such beautiful work. Looking forward to seeing more from you ;)
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Myrethy Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love these characters, love this picture, AHHH :happybounce:
TheShyCorona Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The coloring and shading looks awesome :> Both of the characters have great expressions .
Awesome ~! :>
Zarak342 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
You got some amazing composition and colorwork on this piece, wow! Makes me want to commission you.
Starshot-seeker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow!! very amazing pic!!! :wow: I totally love all here, but specially the colors with that so awesome 3D effect :nod:
indigowolfswhisper Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an amazing picture of the sisters^^I really love the details you put into your work :heart:
jullivia Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Its epical! Poses are so .... Natural look :o
Nortstar Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
wow it is really amaznig :)
StreepPrime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
This has to be one of the best OC pictures I have ever seen...serious...
Sounddrive Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Primus have mercy . . .
tsark Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
I know nothing about these two whatsoever but this picture is making me drool!! :P'''''''''
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