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Finished commission for :iconlyricabelachium: featuring her OC twins AshBringer and CliffStrider fighting each other :3

This turned out much better than I thought and I'm very pleased with the result though there are still a couple of things that bug me but if I tried to fix them all I would never get done ^^
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Lines done in Corel Painter X
Colors done in SAI
Some final lighting and adjustments done in PS CS5

.... yeah I just can't get all I want with one programm :3
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:iconindigofire1o9:
I really like this scene. The poses look so natural. The coloring is magnificent, and the way you positioned them is perfect. The way Cliffstrider is looking into Ashbringer's eyes with an evil smirk just sends chills up my spine. This picture sends so many thoughts in a person's head like "I bet you they are fighting over who is the most powerful..." or "If I were Cliffstrider, I would totally shoot Ashbringer with my gun..." or something like that. That is what true art does. ;)

The only thing I would recommend is maybe next time, you can brighten their eyes up a bit to make them glow. It seems like they are in a dark area, which would make the light effect glow even more.
But, people are just too distracted on how amazing this picture is, they ignore it. If I wasn't writing this Critique, then I would not have noticed it.

Amazing job. Such beautiful work. Looking forward to seeing more from you ;)
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:iconmyrethy:
Myrethy Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love these characters, love this picture, AHHH :happybounce:
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:icontheshycorona:
TheShyCorona Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The coloring and shading looks awesome :> Both of the characters have great expressions .
Awesome ~! :>
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:iconzarak342:
Zarak342 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
You got some amazing composition and colorwork on this piece, wow! Makes me want to commission you.
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:iconstarshot-seeker:
Starshot-seeker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow!! very amazing pic!!! :wow: I totally love all here, but specially the colors with that so awesome 3D effect :nod:
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:iconindigowolfswhisper:
indigowolfswhisper Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an amazing picture of the sisters^^I really love the details you put into your work :heart:
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:iconjullivia:
jullivia Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Its epical! Poses are so .... Natural look :o
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:iconnortstar:
Nortstar Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
wow it is really amaznig :)
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:iconstreepprime:
StreepPrime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
This has to be one of the best OC pictures I have ever seen...serious...
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:iconsounddrive:
Sounddrive Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Primus have mercy . . .
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:icontsark:
tsark Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
I know nothing about these two whatsoever but this picture is making me drool!! :P'''''''''
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:iconsevenxlives:
sevenxlives Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
echt genial wie du immer die gesichtszüge machst. ^^
sieht übrigens sehr klasse aus.
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:iconluzamon:
luzamon Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Epic
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:iconjvel4073:
jvel4073 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW!! This is Very Good, Love the Action. :winner:
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :3
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:iconthe-hollster:
The-Hollster Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student General Artist
This is just an amazing bit of art, great work!
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconthe-hollster:
The-Hollster Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcome!:la:
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:iconbajecznamirra:
BajecznaMirra Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wow Amazing :love:
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :3
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:iconbajecznamirra:
BajecznaMirra Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No problem :hug:
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:iconimaginationdiva:
ImaginationDiva Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Whoa!! The colored version is awesome!! XD
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D thanks!
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:iconbee930:
bee930 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
This looks so good! :omfg:
The shading is great, and the poses are perfect for the scene.
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D Thank you!
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:iconbee930:
bee930 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
You're welcome ^^
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:iconlyricabelachium:
LyricaBelachium Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I went geslterluetilrujgsleuj at the beggining of today and I'm still doing it, once I calm down I'll write a critic XD ty so much sweedums, I hope the money helps you.
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'3 Glad you like it :3

Sure it does :D
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:icongrapejelleyy06:
grapejelleyy06 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Filmographer
AMAZING!
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :3
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:icongrapejelleyy06:
grapejelleyy06 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Filmographer
you're welcome
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:iconkodyyoung:
KodyYoung Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
POW! RIGHT TO THE KISSER!
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well sometimes words just don't help anymore :D
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:iconladybeelze:
LadyBeelze Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow all look realy good o_O but for some reason i specially liked the broken wall. great job as always <3
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'D thanks!
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:iconoswo:
oswo Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Mmmmmmm it turns great indeed!
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you dear!
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:iconanother-language:
another-language Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, wirklich ein geniales Bild mit viel Action! Auch die Gesichtsausdrücke sind klasse und es gibt viele Details zu entdecken, z.B. die Kratzer auf CliffStrider's Arm und auf AshBringer.
Du hast dein Talent mal wieder spektakulär bewiesen! :clap:
Also, wär ich jetzt ein Kunstlehrer würd ich sagen, dass das eine 1+++++++++++ ist! ;P
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D Danke!

hehe schade das ich keinen Kunstunterricht mehr hab XD
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:iconanother-language:
another-language Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bitte! :D
Son Mist aber auch! :XD:
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:icondark-joys47:
dark-joys47 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wow:
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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:iconlaoness:
Laoness Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome! x3 sieht super aus :D
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug: Danke!
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:iconlaoness:
Laoness Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
biddö! :3 :huggle:
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:icondark-claw666:
Dark-Claw666 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i really love it how you color and shade your art ^^

good job, dear! :D
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks dear!
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:icondark-claw666:
Dark-Claw666 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome! :3
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:iconmonsterkatze:
Monsterkatze Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sieht richtig genial aus =3
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:iconcrimson-nemesis:
crimson-nemesis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'D Danke!
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:iconvalong:
Valong Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Sieht guuut aus !! Sehr dynamisch. Und wie er ihn in die Wand reinbrettert...äußerst spektakulär und furios.
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